Dream Deep

The haikus... they're calling your name, kiddo... :twisted:

Agreed... *new title edited*

Well, I hope it comes along well for ya... as soon as it gets sorted out. ^_^ It was a great read, you're not allowed to give it up. :wink: ...

Hi Myth, thanks for the crit. ^_^ I really appreciate it. The Strazhas are people right? Then you would need to replace ‘which’ with ‘who’. Right you are... sorry about ...

Ahh... I've got to crit the rest of this. I'm behind. ^_^ I'll try to have Chapter 4 commented upon soon for ya... :wink:

(spacing, mon frere...?) ^_^

Heh... *hugs* Sheer happiness suffices. ^_^

Ah, but first copy's already promised to Kay... :wink: I love you Crysi. Here, have a cookie. *gives cookie* You make my day. And yes, heh, I'm only 14... don't ...

This was pretty neat.... the only problem is one you seem to face with a lot of your stories - it's really rushed. It drags us right through. Try to ...

Make it speedy, I want to read the new version of this. :wink: It's too good a concept to sit in here and gather dust.

Ah, I find it difficult to write proper poetry. I get too angsty. And that's what blogs are for, no? I won't subject the rest of you to it on ...

Aw, Niamh... ^_^ Thank you so much. You've just made my day.

Chapter 4 Soldier: We’ll have the medals sent along after you, they need to be documented first so they can write you up temporary papers. Sir... your face. You’re... you’re ...

Thanks Imp! ^_^ Time is a bit limited right now, I'm afraid, but tomorrow I'll go through and make the suggested changes. Thank you very much! Ah yes, the snot-beaten-out-of-him ...

I love it love it love it love it, a million times love it but then I think I already told you that. :wink: Great job, Snow Pig. ~Dreamy ^_^